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Met the right people,
Said the right things.
Did the necessary work.
Lost his soul.

But at least he made it.
Many of us won't.
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I like simplicity, it says all that is needed :)

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Watching for pigs on the wing....
Thanks very much for the fave! I'm no poet, but it's the idea that counts right? :D

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How I long for my 80s sneakers
Sometimes it's better not to be a poet. Poets are pretentious and can start to overdo it to try and be poetic. I like simple things that hit home better. :nod: My favourite poems by me and by other people are usually the least wordy :)

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Watching for pigs on the wing....
Still, I hope to one day to grow a poet's goatee and click my fingers all the time. For clothes, I'm thinking maybe a purplish scarf and feathered hat (never a beret!), possibly mismatched shoes as well. Something velvety would also be a good addition...and ninja stars. Oh, and buzz saw blades glued to the knees of acid washed jeans. I'm getting such vivid images now!!!
Hopefully everyone will despise me on sight, thereby fueling my angst-ridden, heavy metal rhymes!!!

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How I long for my 80s sneakers
Wow, I really like this. Theodamus said it all. :)

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I'm a pie of one and twenty blackbirds and they're all cheeping to get out.
Nice, I won´t make it.

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Man... this room STINKS...


I should stop to fart
Souls are overrated... go son... go!

I agree with theo... you seem to poignantly say what's on your mind in 31 words.
Poetry is all about condensed meaning after all :D

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If you shun it, how can you fun it???
thanks Lil! I think it's something that everyone can relate to, though it probably sounds a bit more judgemental than I meant it too!

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How I long for my 80s sneakers
Oh, but it all depends on what you classify as 'making it'. In this one, I'm talking about society's definition, which by and large is fairly shallow I think :D
Don't despair, as long as you are a yourself then you have 'made it' in my books :)
Thank you for commenting!

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How I long for my 80s sneakers

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